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(Extract adapted from a city council leaflet advertising a public museum)

 

What kind of mistake do you see? (Choose one:)

  • apostrophes
  • articles
  • doesn't make sense
  • punctuation
  • singular / plural
  • spelling


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Answer: apostrophes

In this example, the owners of the museum need to sit down and have a long think about what the name of their museum should be. In the title – 'Shaw's House Museum' – they have used the apostrophe correctly: the 'House', or even the 'House Museum', belong to 'Shaw' (whoever he or she is). But in the address section the name of the museum is unceremoniously stripped of its apostrophe to become plain old: 'Shaws House Museum'. Since consistency is one of the hallmarks of good writing, the author would be better off choosing one or the other of the two titles and sticking to it. I would favour the first – 'Shaw's House Museum' – because it uses the possessive apostrophe 's' in a grammatically correct way. We know that 'Shaw' is an English surname, so we can guess that the name of the museum indicates that the house (or the house museum) belongs to (or used to belong to) a person named Shaw. In which case, the author needs to use the possessive apostrophe 's'.


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